I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Wednesday, 8 August 2012

The run

"On your mark, get set, go!" I was running like a leopard.

 I was tired but I knew that I couldn't stop.

I must keep going. I was half way down the finish line.
I had a burst of energy to get through.
I finished . I was so tired I dropped.
Then the judge said I was first.
I was so relieved I couldn't move .
Then I saw the others. It was a long run but after

we all shook hands . I got the gold medal.
I was so happy . THE END

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