I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Friday, 4 May 2012

Lief 's Diary

Dear Diary

Lief , Barda and jasmine are on a  dangerist qusest searching for the three parts of the fabled. Ther only hope of saving the thousands of deltroans hald captive by the shadow lord.

by josh room 15.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Josh
    Thank you for your post this week. I like that you have a diary format but I'm worried that you haven't proofread your post or put much effort into it. How can we improve your post for next time?

    Stephanie

    ReplyDelete

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